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	TSR : Web boards : O&P : "Through A Masters Eyes" 1 2 Through A Masters Eyes (13) This post is on the O&P web board. 30 Jul 10, 10:38 AM XMistressMacabreX US, 22 mths I'm not going to tell you how to write or how to spell , I mean My girl would LOVE that to be done to her I wouldn't use it as a punishment but hey to each their own. It wasn't My favorite story but that's because I like Fem-Dom . Personally I don't think people should have cared all that much about your spelling I think your point was to show it by Your point of view . No one else's ~ shrugs ~ good luck to you 30 Jul 10, 1:29 PM SirSeven 3 yrs 258-321-589 wrote: SirSeven wrote: I didn't find the story harsh or offensive. It wasn't my cup of tea, mind you ... but that's not the point. I also think it's great that some have suggested using spell-check and an occasional paragraph break every now and then. When did giving constructive criticism become a dirty word? Lord_Uther's cleaned up version was much easier to read than the original. Regards, Sir Seven In all due respect, constructive criticism is no longer constructive when it merely is displayed as criticism; no positive input into growth. imho respectfully Master David's kahlan I started a new thread here to avoid derailing this discussion any further. To avoid criticism, do nothing, say nothing, be nothing. -Elbert Hubbard 2 Nov 10, 8:07 AM 949-179-345 US(TN), 19 mths £ Thanks, hi so i do not confuse you or anyone I am the author my grammer no is not good at all lol, I was her Master ( Master Nick ) lets just say I have been demoted. I must learn to follow befor I can lead" or so im told. Thank you for seeing my point of view on this poem to all the others do not consintraite so much on the flaws but place yourself in the scene be it the Master, the Slave, or the Guest. ... thanks